Two effects: using too many conjunctions like Hemmingway and Cormac McCarthy. Or using none like Churchill or Lincoln. There are technical words for this. Bort knows them and so do you.
"I asked him with my eyes to ask again yes and then he
asked me would I yes to say yes my mountain flower and first I put my
arms around him yes and drew him down to me so he could feel my breasts
all perfume yes and his heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will
Yes"
-james joyce
Kind of sleepy and emphatic.
"He was a bag of bones, a floppy doll, a broken stick, a maniac."
-kerouac
Staccato but maybe dismissive.