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10-11-2008, 03:46 AM
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| | | Poetry Thread?
I'm sorry if I'm being redundant or whatever, but I was wondering if there is a thread where people post their poetry for comment, etc.?
I am sure there are poets here...where are all the poets??? |
10-11-2008, 04:15 AM
|  | slow refrain | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: austin.
Posts: 3,626
| | | i'm sure we've had one before, but you could use this one.
i write poetry. i'm taking a poetry class right now for the credit and though about posting the three i just did for an assignment, but i'm not sure i'm confident enough to post my stuff on KR.
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10-11-2008, 05:00 AM
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| | | Audio Tapes
ok, you don't have to tell me twice!!!
AUDIO TAPES
Chemistry residue of polaroid memories....
& I walk past
Sending tornadoes and blackouts.
Stardust flitting through a smile
Coloring the blacks & whites.
Strangers with names.
An adrenaline rush between the caffeine kicks,
Even blue skies burn sometimes.
& we might as well replace ourselves
With portraits and audio tapes,
Emotion mind and a Half-Smile.
When you went, there were eclipses,
Storms, and a thousand other raindrops.
But in your world, I guess it was just sunshine. |
10-11-2008, 05:19 AM
|  | chanel meth pipe. | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
| | | normally i would tell someone who started one of these threads that they suck but im actually quite taken with your work. post more?
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10-11-2008, 05:59 AM
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| | | Thank you
Thank you.....though I'm perfectly ok with being told my stuff sucks. Just as long as I am given an intelligent reason why....
I have lots more...I RARELY share my poetry, so I'll have to think about it... |
10-11-2008, 08:13 AM
|  | Phil Goff | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
| | | My mate and I made some deliberately shit poetry the other day that I will share sometime. We decided to be pointlessly confrontational and controversial, and so we made a list of confrontational words and just shoehorned them into some really bad poetry. It was genius. I impressed even myself with how cynical I am, and how bad the poetry was.
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Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.
I escaped somehow. Let's go
actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter |
10-11-2008, 11:10 AM
|  | Strafe Guru Narcissists ! | | Join Date: May 2007 Location: On the Redwood Hwy
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| | Quote:
Originally Posted by PerfectTonight I'm sorry if I'm being redundant or whatever, but I was wondering if there is a thread where people post their poetry for comment, etc.?
I am sure there are poets here...where are all the poets??? | Sophia_ says there is a poet within us all. We must coax out our inner poets, outside to play with us in the sun-splashed fields of wildflowers.
Your new thread title in Spirituality, "OSHO Anyone ?", is sort of like starting a seance in the basement of the KR mansion, and asking, "Are there any spirits here tonight that would like to communicate with us ?"
I really like your 'Audio Tapes' poem !
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10-11-2008, 11:12 AM
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| | Oh, I have a piece that is the most lavishly 'f-you' piece and I simply adore it. I have no qualms about posting that one here. The more people that read it, the better I feel   |
10-11-2008, 11:15 AM
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Originally Posted by Rancheria Sophia_ says there is a poet within us all. We must coax out our inner poets, outside to play with us in the sun-splashed fields of wildflowers.
Your new thread title in Spirituality, "OSHO Anyone ?", is sort of like starting a seance in the basement of the KR mansion, and asking, "Are there any spirits here tonight that would like to communicate with us ?"
I really like your 'Audio Tapes' poem ! | I just didn't see any topics on him and I just wanted to see what kinds of responses I would receive.
Thanks about 'Audio'  |
10-11-2008, 12:52 PM
|  | Blessed are the forgetful | | Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New York
Posts: 1,559
| | | Last poem I wrote was during a break down. It is the epitome of crap. It just defines my lunacy...in one of the most indescriptive ways possible. I used to write good poetry. That talent just went out the window. PerfectTonight- Audio isn't too bad. Keep posting. |
10-11-2008, 12:58 PM
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Originally Posted by CuntCake Last poem I wrote was during a break down. It is the epitome of crap. It just defines my lunacy...in one of the most indescriptive ways possible. I used to write good poetry. That talent just went out the window. PerfectTonight- Audio isn't too bad. Keep posting. | Sometimes the epitome of crap makes or the best art, haha!
Some of my 'crap' is just finger spasms that result from cool worlds that are swimming in my head and somehow the come out as award-winning 'crap'. I don't get it... |
10-11-2008, 07:16 PM
| | Phil Goff | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
| | | right, here's Nurses = Prostitutes. I don't think they are, but it's, like, totally challenging preconceptions and shit. It wouldn't let me do my rinky-dink layout, however. BAD KR-ma.
Nurses = Prostitutes
fawning for glory
Burnish hearts on cold
steel
New sluts made old
By a corporate holocaust
health system
A tender hand
slashed and hung up
A withered limb
testament and trophy
Marking time till rape
makes them young
And the victims are
remembered for the blood
they gave
Pimp to a child, that
glorious victory
Gaining a higher price
for the lowest-valued human
A priceless cunt
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Woah. It totally changed my perspective on stuff. And took about two minutes to write, which means its poetry-per-minute ratio is good. Should I be putting the confronting words in bold? 78-year old grannies might have a fit. I must try this at the local poetry group.
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Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.
I escaped somehow. Let's go
actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter |
10-11-2008, 07:50 PM
|  | bedroom revolutionary | | Join Date: May 2007 Location: under neon loneliness
Posts: 5,786
| | | ...must spread...
__________________ We shall abolish the orgasm. Our neurologists are at work upon it now. There will be no loyalty, except loyalty towards the Party. |
10-11-2008, 08:22 PM
| | chanel meth pipe. | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
| | | i havent done this in years.
surprise surprise
you opened your eyes
you're getting wise
between your thighs
all it implies
is repeated goodbyes
and denigrating lies
lead to deprecating cries
metemorphisize, baptize
revolutionize, arise
improvise, despise
back up, revise
and isnt it nice
to be so concise?
to smile and entice?
whatever the price?
DISH AWAY.
__________________ if you dont believe youre dying then i wont tell you that youre dying but do you not believe youre dying just because it gets you down? |
10-11-2008, 08:32 PM
| | Phil Goff | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
| | | I also wrote this cheesegasm poem, and asked people to try and work out what place it was about. I'll take guesses in the form of neg reps. It's basically meaningless, but it was ostensibly about somewhere. And not Panama Fashion Week.
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Sterile runway of abuse
Dripping with birth defects
and dementia
Kike nigger parasite paradise
Slave to fascist retard rejection
Can only look forward to
euthanised failure on judgement day
This heretic cannibal horror
No lynch mob can murder
No lies can betray
No incest can fuck
Racist sexist police brutality, slaughter
Like a gas chamber
cleansing and suicidal
Makes foul and pestilential
This homeless capitalist terrorism
A plastic surgery and starvation
storm trooper amputee nightmare
This paedophile abortion rejects
communist disease, an apostate Hitler
The faggot of the apocalypse
The plague, the famine, the
lethal injection
Bestial necrophilia is no torture here
A nuclear wasteland
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So basically I just ended up with Manic Street Preachers lyrics, and if you really want to be confrontational you just write sex poetry about James Bulger and some five-year olds and claim it's an ironic statement about the objectification of children.
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Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.
I escaped somehow. Let's go
actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter |
10-11-2008, 09:02 PM
| | bedroom revolutionary | | Join Date: May 2007 Location: under neon loneliness
Posts: 5,786
| | Quote:
Originally Posted by shitty weave i havent done this in years.
surprise surprise
you opened your eyes
you're getting wise
between your thighs
all it implies
is repeated goodbyes
and denigrating lies
lead to deprecating cries
metemorphisize, baptize
revolutionize, arise
improvise, despise
back up, revise
and isnt it nice
to be so concise?
to smile and entice?
whatever the price?
DISH AWAY. | Difficult to summarise,
I would advise.
Can we compromise?
__________________ We shall abolish the orgasm. Our neurologists are at work upon it now. There will be no loyalty, except loyalty towards the Party.
Last edited by Amity : 10-11-2008 at 09:06 PM.
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10-11-2008, 09:17 PM
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Posts: 1,479
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Originally Posted by bort I also wrote this cheesegasm poem, and asked people to try and work out what place it was about. I'll take guesses in the form of neg reps. It's basically meaningless, but it was ostensibly about somewhere. And not Panama Fashion Week.
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Sterile runway of abuse
Dripping with birth defects
and dementia
Kike nigger parasite paradise
Slave to fascist retard rejection
Can only look forward to
euthanised failure on judgement day
This heretic cannibal horror
No lynch mob can murder
No lies can betray
No incest can fuck
Racist sexist police brutality, slaughter
Like a gas chamber
cleansing and suicidal
Makes foul and pestilential
This homeless capitalist terrorism
A plastic surgery and starvation
storm trooper amputee nightmare
This paedophile abortion rejects
communist disease, an apostate Hitler
The faggot of the apocalypse
The plague, the famine, the
lethal injection
Bestial necrophilia is no torture here
A nuclear wasteland
-----
So basically I just ended up with Manic Street Preachers lyrics, and if you really want to be confrontational you just write sex poetry about James Bulger and some five-year olds and claim it's an ironic statement about the objectification of children. | your ass?  |
10-11-2008, 09:18 PM
| | chanel meth pipe. | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
| | Quote:
Originally Posted by Amity Difficult to summarise,
I would advise.
Can we compromise? | no need to critisize
not to sensationlize
my literary shanghais
but how about a reprise?
seriously. i could do this all day.
__________________ if you dont believe youre dying then i wont tell you that youre dying but do you not believe youre dying just because it gets you down? |
10-11-2008, 11:09 PM
| | Blessed are the forgetful | | Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: New York
Posts: 1,559
| | | I wrote this a little less than a year ago.
Entranced in the aroma
the sweetness of drunk breath
on my neck
too bad I can't remember
how it felt
to be held sober
but it's so enticing
and I've been drawn
in all the wrong directions
but I miss those winter nights
and those sober eyes
you'll realize
who's the fool
and if it's too late
for you to see
I'll keep walking this way
and maybe you'll follow me
to the light that seems to
show itself
deep inside ourselves
I could never regret you
I could never forget
how easy it was for you | |
