kittyradio.com



kittyradio.com » creativity » the written word » Poetry Thread?


Welcome to the kittyradio.com forums.

You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions and access our other features. Remove these ads when you register. By joining our free community you will have access to post topics, communicate privately with other members (PM), respond to polls, upload content and access many other special features. Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!

If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact contact us.
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 10-11-2008, 03:46 AM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Poetry Thread?

I'm sorry if I'm being redundant or whatever, but I was wondering if there is a thread where people post their poetry for comment, etc.?

I am sure there are poets here...where are all the poets???
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 10-11-2008, 04:15 AM
sokkar's Avatar
sokkar sokkar is offline
slow refrain
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: austin.
Posts: 3,626
sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute sokkar has a reputation beyond repute
i'm sure we've had one before, but you could use this one.

i write poetry. i'm taking a poetry class right now for the credit and though about posting the three i just did for an assignment, but i'm not sure i'm confident enough to post my stuff on KR.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by DoloresHaze View Post
I did not miss the point, I just had a moment where Marilyn's tragedy overwhelmed me. Such a pure creature, she was just light gone too soon.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 10-11-2008, 05:00 AM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Audio Tapes

ok, you don't have to tell me twice!!!


AUDIO TAPES

Chemistry residue of polaroid memories....

& I walk past
Sending tornadoes and blackouts.
Stardust flitting through a smile
Coloring the blacks & whites.

Strangers with names.
An adrenaline rush between the caffeine kicks,
Even blue skies burn sometimes.

& we might as well replace ourselves
With portraits and audio tapes,
Emotion mind and a Half-Smile.

When you went, there were eclipses,
Storms, and a thousand other raindrops.

But in your world, I guess it was just sunshine.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 10-11-2008, 05:19 AM
shitty weave's Avatar
shitty weave shitty weave is offline
chanel meth pipe.
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute
normally i would tell someone who started one of these threads that they suck but im actually quite taken with your work. post more?
__________________
if you dont believe youre dying then i wont tell you that youre dying but do you not believe youre dying just because it gets you down?
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 10-11-2008, 05:59 AM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Thank you

Thank you.....though I'm perfectly ok with being told my stuff sucks. Just as long as I am given an intelligent reason why....

I have lots more...I RARELY share my poetry, so I'll have to think about it...
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 10-11-2008, 08:13 AM
bort's Avatar
bort bort is offline
Phil Goff
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute
My mate and I made some deliberately shit poetry the other day that I will share sometime. We decided to be pointlessly confrontational and controversial, and so we made a list of confrontational words and just shoehorned them into some really bad poetry. It was genius. I impressed even myself with how cynical I am, and how bad the poetry was.
__________________
Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.

I escaped somehow. Let's go

actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 10-11-2008, 11:10 AM
Rancheria's Avatar
Rancheria Rancheria is offline
Strafe Guru Narcissists !
 
Join Date: May 2007
Location: On the Redwood Hwy
Posts: 311
Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute Rancheria has a reputation beyond repute
Quote:
Originally Posted by PerfectTonight View Post
I'm sorry if I'm being redundant or whatever, but I was wondering if there is a thread where people post their poetry for comment, etc.?

I am sure there are poets here...where are all the poets???
Sophia_ says there is a poet within us all. We must coax out our inner poets, outside to play with us in the sun-splashed fields of wildflowers.

Your new thread title in Spirituality, "OSHO Anyone ?", is sort of like starting a seance in the basement of the KR mansion, and asking, "Are there any spirits here tonight that would like to communicate with us ?"

I really like your 'Audio Tapes' poem !
__________________
Sophy_'s Motto of His Spousal Invalubility: "My wife does not want to loose [sic] the house--I imagine she would get along fine with out me, for she is an attractive woman who could easily find someone to be her companion. As a man, I do the things for her she can't find in another woman." ~~carefulcarpnetter
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 10-11-2008, 11:12 AM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Oh, I have a piece that is the most lavishly 'f-you' piece and I simply adore it. I have no qualms about posting that one here. The more people that read it, the better I feel
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 10-11-2008, 11:15 AM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rancheria View Post
Sophia_ says there is a poet within us all. We must coax out our inner poets, outside to play with us in the sun-splashed fields of wildflowers.

Your new thread title in Spirituality, "OSHO Anyone ?", is sort of like starting a seance in the basement of the KR mansion, and asking, "Are there any spirits here tonight that would like to communicate with us ?"

I really like your 'Audio Tapes' poem !
I just didn't see any topics on him and I just wanted to see what kinds of responses I would receive.

Thanks about 'Audio'
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 10-11-2008, 12:52 PM
CuntCake's Avatar
CuntCake CuntCake is offline
Blessed are the forgetful
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: New York
Posts: 1,559
CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute
Last poem I wrote was during a break down. It is the epitome of crap. It just defines my lunacy...in one of the most indescriptive ways possible. I used to write good poetry. That talent just went out the window. PerfectTonight- Audio isn't too bad. Keep posting.
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 10-11-2008, 12:58 PM
PerfectTonight's Avatar
PerfectTonight PerfectTonight is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 109
PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of PerfectTonight has much to be proud of
Quote:
Originally Posted by CuntCake View Post
Last poem I wrote was during a break down. It is the epitome of crap. It just defines my lunacy...in one of the most indescriptive ways possible. I used to write good poetry. That talent just went out the window. PerfectTonight- Audio isn't too bad. Keep posting.
Sometimes the epitome of crap makes or the best art, haha!
Some of my 'crap' is just finger spasms that result from cool worlds that are swimming in my head and somehow the come out as award-winning 'crap'. I don't get it...
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 10-11-2008, 07:16 PM
bort's Avatar
bort bort is offline
Phil Goff
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute
right, here's Nurses = Prostitutes. I don't think they are, but it's, like, totally challenging preconceptions and shit. It wouldn't let me do my rinky-dink layout, however. BAD KR-ma.

Nurses = Prostitutes

fawning for glory
Burnish hearts on cold
steel
New sluts made old
By a corporate holocaust
health system
A tender hand
slashed and hung up
A withered limb
testament and trophy
Marking time till rape
makes them young
And the victims are
remembered for the blood
they gave
Pimp to a child, that
glorious victory
Gaining a higher price
for the lowest-valued human
A priceless cunt

-----

Woah. It totally changed my perspective on stuff. And took about two minutes to write, which means its poetry-per-minute ratio is good. Should I be putting the confronting words in bold? 78-year old grannies might have a fit. I must try this at the local poetry group.
__________________
Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.

I escaped somehow. Let's go

actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 10-11-2008, 07:50 PM
Amity's Avatar
Amity Amity is online now
bedroom revolutionary
 
Join Date: May 2007
Location: under neon loneliness
Posts: 5,786
Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute
...must spread...
__________________
We shall abolish the orgasm. Our neurologists are at work upon it now. There will be no loyalty, except loyalty towards the Party.
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 10-11-2008, 08:22 PM
shitty weave's Avatar
shitty weave shitty weave is offline
chanel meth pipe.
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute
i havent done this in years.


surprise surprise
you opened your eyes
you're getting wise
between your thighs
all it implies
is repeated goodbyes
and denigrating lies
lead to deprecating cries
metemorphisize, baptize
revolutionize, arise
improvise, despise
back up, revise
and isnt it nice
to be so concise?
to smile and entice?
whatever the price?


DISH AWAY.
__________________
if you dont believe youre dying then i wont tell you that youre dying but do you not believe youre dying just because it gets you down?
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 10-11-2008, 08:32 PM
bort's Avatar
bort bort is offline
Phil Goff
 
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Westport, New Zealand
Posts: 18,382
bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute bort has a reputation beyond repute
I also wrote this cheesegasm poem, and asked people to try and work out what place it was about. I'll take guesses in the form of neg reps. It's basically meaningless, but it was ostensibly about somewhere. And not Panama Fashion Week.

________________

Sterile runway of abuse
Dripping with birth defects
and dementia
Kike nigger parasite paradise
Slave to fascist retard rejection
Can only look forward to
euthanised failure on judgement day
This heretic cannibal horror
No lynch mob can murder
No lies can betray
No incest can fuck
Racist sexist police brutality, slaughter
Like a gas chamber
cleansing and suicidal
Makes foul and pestilential

This homeless capitalist terrorism
A plastic surgery and starvation
storm trooper amputee nightmare
This paedophile abortion rejects
communist disease, an apostate Hitler

The faggot of the apocalypse
The plague, the famine, the
lethal injection
Bestial necrophilia is no torture here
A nuclear wasteland

-----

So basically I just ended up with Manic Street Preachers lyrics, and if you really want to be confrontational you just write sex poetry about James Bulger and some five-year olds and claim it's an ironic statement about the objectification of children.
__________________
Time is the distance that you can't return by miles.

I escaped somehow. Let's go

actualy [sic] I have quite a blessed life if I'm honest. I have many people to love, hate few and have few money problem's [sic].... What more does a person need? Oh yeah and I have some kind of humbleness unlike you of course ^_^ ~ CarefulCarpenter
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old 10-11-2008, 09:02 PM
Amity's Avatar
Amity Amity is online now
bedroom revolutionary
 
Join Date: May 2007
Location: under neon loneliness
Posts: 5,786
Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute Amity has a reputation beyond repute
Quote:
Originally Posted by shitty weave View Post
i havent done this in years.


surprise surprise
you opened your eyes
you're getting wise
between your thighs
all it implies
is repeated goodbyes
and denigrating lies
lead to deprecating cries
metemorphisize, baptize
revolutionize, arise
improvise, despise
back up, revise
and isnt it nice
to be so concise?
to smile and entice?
whatever the price?


DISH AWAY.
Difficult to summarise,
I would advise.
Can we compromise?
__________________
We shall abolish the orgasm. Our neurologists are at work upon it now. There will be no loyalty, except loyalty towards the Party.

Last edited by Amity : 10-11-2008 at 09:06 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old 10-11-2008, 09:17 PM
DoloresHaze DoloresHaze is offline
Registered Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Posts: 1,479
DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts DoloresHaze is infamous around these parts
Quote:
Originally Posted by bort View Post
I also wrote this cheesegasm poem, and asked people to try and work out what place it was about. I'll take guesses in the form of neg reps. It's basically meaningless, but it was ostensibly about somewhere. And not Panama Fashion Week.

________________

Sterile runway of abuse
Dripping with birth defects
and dementia
Kike nigger parasite paradise
Slave to fascist retard rejection
Can only look forward to
euthanised failure on judgement day
This heretic cannibal horror
No lynch mob can murder
No lies can betray
No incest can fuck
Racist sexist police brutality, slaughter
Like a gas chamber
cleansing and suicidal
Makes foul and pestilential

This homeless capitalist terrorism
A plastic surgery and starvation
storm trooper amputee nightmare
This paedophile abortion rejects
communist disease, an apostate Hitler

The faggot of the apocalypse
The plague, the famine, the
lethal injection
Bestial necrophilia is no torture here
A nuclear wasteland

-----

So basically I just ended up with Manic Street Preachers lyrics, and if you really want to be confrontational you just write sex poetry about James Bulger and some five-year olds and claim it's an ironic statement about the objectification of children.
your ass?
Reply With Quote
  #18  
Old 10-11-2008, 09:18 PM
shitty weave's Avatar
shitty weave shitty weave is offline
chanel meth pipe.
 
Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: 7th ring of hell?
Posts: 1,564
shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute shitty weave has a reputation beyond repute
Quote:
Originally Posted by Amity View Post
Difficult to summarise,
I would advise.
Can we compromise?
no need to critisize
not to sensationlize
my literary shanghais
but how about a reprise?



seriously. i could do this all day.
__________________
if you dont believe youre dying then i wont tell you that youre dying but do you not believe youre dying just because it gets you down?
Reply With Quote
  #19  
Old 10-11-2008, 11:09 PM
CuntCake's Avatar
CuntCake CuntCake is offline
Blessed are the forgetful
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: New York
Posts: 1,559
CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute CuntCake has a reputation beyond repute
I wrote this a little less than a year ago.

Entranced in the aroma
the sweetness of drunk breath
on my neck
too bad I can't remember
how it felt
to be held sober
but it's so enticing
and I've been drawn
in all the wrong directions
but I miss those winter nights
and those sober eyes
you'll realize
who's the fool
and if it's too late
for you to see
I'll keep walking this way
and maybe you'll follow me
to the light that seems to
show itself
deep inside ourselves
I could never regret you
I could never forget
how easy it was for you