Originally Posted by orchestral
it must be a weird engrish translation. or like, ****ty german erotica, translated into chinese, and then translated from that to english for publication in some really low budget e-book with no editors.
I would think the same, but then there's the line where it says: Damn!
Melissa thought. I wish there was a better way to say that.
which leads me to believe that the bad English was intentional.
Anyhow, dirtyplotte, kudos on a great thread!