so I'm writing this song... for a guy who denied me a second date. I've never been this desperate for a second date. anyway, the song is like a pj havey radiohead cross, but clearly not as good. but it sounds pretty good. I'm trying to make it really pretty. I'm not finished and I'm still laying down the vocal track... there are all these little errors... but I'm not sure if I should try to make it perfect. What is more likely to get a second date: sending him a prett good song a week after being rejected, saying, "I made this song for you I know u rejected me but I'm madly in love." or waiting 2 weeks and saying "i can't stop thinking bout u made this song. please go on a second date with me or ill kill myself" or are there any better ideas? its a good song. I want it to be perfect. I'm gonna post it here for feedback. I need to write a song good enough to get me a second chance. can music turn back time or make someone overlook insanity?

a "lovesong" cant be perfect

it lacks in lyrical content!
however instrumentals can be

a "fuck you, i can make it on my own" avril-esque song would get you more radio play.

actually, know what? i wish that you'd kut and hit an artery already. seriously motherfucker. whine whine whine. write a song about dying and shitting blood on the one you love.

Radiohead and PJ Harvey.....

Isn't that a tad depressing?