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Old 07-31-2006, 09:06 PM
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selfish apology

this is a self loathing poem
this is i'm sorry to everyone
this is the reason i'm lonely
this is an ode to no one

i must have been raped by the darkness
i crossed my own name off my wish list
the memory of it seems so perfect
i can't recall nor forget it

i want a funneral for something
death was my only beginning
i was born straight into your pitty
i want you all to cry with me

this is a self loathing poem
this is i'm sorry to everyone
this is the reason i'm leaving
this is an ode to no one

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Old 08-02-2006, 09:00 AM
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eh..?
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Old 08-02-2006, 11:23 AM
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Excluding the opening lines / refrain, I thought it was ok. Reminds me of something Courtney might pen circa MBTHG. Keep it up. I have suspicions that you have better poetry than this. If so, do post.
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Old 08-05-2006, 10:12 AM
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thanks for responding and being honest...

i do have better poems but the problem is that i feel like i USED to write good poetry.

everytime i've tried to write in the past couple of years it seems to be mediocore blah blah...

eh i'm stuck
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