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06-10-2006, 08:17 PM
|  | a.k.a Madge Spammer | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Panama
Posts: 8,223
| | | Another poem
I stood in the middle of a road
In front of me, a paved highway
my life was
On the sides I saw the desert
On the horizon I saw the clear blue sky
I couldn't see where the road ended, I couldn't see where it starts
Should I go forward?
I can't go back
Should I stay right here?
I would rot and die
What could that road hold in store?
Is it good? Is it bad?
Who is there at the end?
Will I regret having walked it at the end?
I stare in hesitation
in front of me, the big nothing. |
06-10-2006, 10:45 PM
|  | Lets stay up | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Australia
Posts: 7,511
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Originally Posted by HighClassHo Will I regret having walked it at the end?
I stare in hesitation
in front of me, the big nothing. |  |
06-10-2006, 11:46 PM
| | a.k.a Madge Spammer | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Panama
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Originally Posted by KillTheLastRomantic | you are always so cute and supportive |
06-11-2006, 03:21 AM
|  | might as well be twisted | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: KR hole
Posts: 2,077
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Originally Posted by HighClassHo I stood in the middle of a road
In front of me, a paved highway
my life was
On the sides I saw the desert
On the horizon I saw the clear blue sky
I couldn't see where the road ended, I couldn't see where it starts
Should I go forward?
I can't go back
Should I stay right here?
I would rot and die
What could that road hold in store?
Is it good? Is it bad?
Who is there at the end?
Will I regret having walked it at the end?
I stare in hesitation
in front of me, the big nothing. | is there going to be a sequel? |
06-11-2006, 04:56 AM
| | a.k.a Madge Spammer | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Panama
Posts: 8,223
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Originally Posted by User Lame is there going to be a sequel? | what do you mean?= |
06-11-2006, 05:53 AM
|  | Fell in love with a girl | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belgium
Posts: 858
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Originally Posted by HighClassHo I stood in the middle of a road
In front of me, a paved highway
my life was
On the sides I saw the desert
On the horizon I saw the clear blue sky
I couldn't see where the road ended, I couldn't see where it starts
Should I go forward?
I can't go back
Should I stay right here?
I would rot and die
What could that road hold in store?
Is it good? Is it bad?
Who is there at the end?
Will I regret having walked it at the end?
I stare in hesitation
in front of me, the big nothing. | it's nice, except the rot and die thing
and is there gonna be a sequel? |
06-11-2006, 08:12 PM
| | a.k.a Madge Spammer | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Panama
Posts: 8,223
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Originally Posted by Anti it's nice, except the rot and die thing
and is there gonna be a sequel? | you don't like it?? why??
and no, I haven't planned a sequel. I could write it though. |
06-14-2006, 03:25 AM
| | might as well be twisted | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: KR hole
Posts: 2,077
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Originally Posted by HighClassHo you don't like it?? why??
and no, I haven't planned a sequel. I could write it though. | no, I thought it was interesting...It's just I was waiting to see what you would do about the point you may decide what to do about the nothing. |
06-14-2006, 09:34 AM
| | Fell in love with a girl | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Belgium
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Originally Posted by HighClassHo you don't like it?? why??
and no, I haven't planned a sequel. I could write it though. | i dunno :s,I like u poem very muc but that line doesnt't feel constructive/ a bit stale perhaps.. i dunno, nvm me |
06-14-2006, 11:48 AM
| | might as well be twisted | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: KR hole
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Originally Posted by Anti i dunno :s,I like u poem very muc but that line doesnt't feel constructive/ a bit stale perhaps.. i dunno, nvm me | highclassho:
Yea, i dont want to sound all like a public service anouncement for a positive mental attitude or anything, but you at least have to add a little humor or a solution to a problem that you present...Because being alone and lost is what most of us are trying to get away from. Sometimes it can work as straight depression but it's been done so much it REALLY has to be something new.
Anti:
Love that avatar, by the way
Last edited by User Lame : 06-14-2006 at 11:52 AM.
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06-19-2006, 03:43 AM
|  | Registered Member | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: toronto
Posts: 557
| | | This poem reminds me a lot of a Sylvia Plath poem (which I'm guessing you have read as your poem's really similar) where she describes the different paths of her life as branches on a tree with the fruits rotting...I think they were figs. wish I could remember the title. | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes |  Linear Mode | 
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