I just wrote this, tell me what you think and be completely honest:

Princess monoxide aspirin stink,
She's the pig whose wine I drink,
Six shiny shotguns by her side,
Her ovaries washed in cyanide.

Drowns in mother's acid bath,
And I can only laugh,
I'll slut you in half,
I'll slut you in half.

She chokes on herself in her sleep,
Her cancer daughters in her keep,
Flowers rot so quick in her presence,
Everything dies and rapes and ferments.

Beauty secrets not so nice,
Rotten is her only vice,
Has no edelweiss,
There's no edelweiss.

I want to turn it into a song, and I was thinking that I might layer sounds of women orgasming and screaming over the guitar solo. Very faint so you can barely hear it, though.

perhaps you shouldn't listen to pretty on the inside right before writing your own songs.

I know, I really dislike using it as such an influence. But when I don't write something POTI-esque, it comes out just plain embarrassing and horrible.

i'd think it was more embarrassing to write something poti-esque. but that's just me.

Well thanks for being honest and I'll try to develop more of my own sound. But the lyrics of early Hole are probably my favorite lyrics ever, I don't see how they are embarrassing.